Friday, October 30, 2015

Just gonna lay this out~

It's a lot more condensed than the original story, but it can be considerably shorter and I think there's no holes. If there are any I think they can be filled more easily. But then on top of it being shorter we can actually focus on characters instead of a million setpieces or too much backstory.

El terriblê is the worlds greatest wrester, and every year, he holds a competition for someone to have the opportunity to take him on and take this title. Up until the previous year, he’s focused mainly in just WWE type wrestling, but recently he’s moved into Luchador territory, so the setup of WWE type fights, rigging, chairs, etc. isn’t too well known by this new audience.

Tia’s father is a great luchador, and they both feel he’s a better wrestler, so he enters the competition. Surprisingly, he’s beaten and in the fanfare of the event his mask is taken. He’s been completely dishonored.

A year later Tia is ready to take on the competition herself and regain her fathers honor and his mask, as well as take the new title for herself. On her first round she’s faced off against another girl who is fundamentally not as good a wrestler as she is, and despite this she’s defeated. Her mask is not taken though. Her fathers was taken as a symbol more than anything else. A combo of Terriblé showing all the other Luchadors he’s better than them as well as just being an enormous douche.

Tia’s spirit is not defeated though, and even though she’s lost as a single wrestler she can try again if she entered with others as a team. The competition is larger than just singles, and teams do compete, though they largely have to fight together in tag team type deals until they are eventually split up.

She gathers four other girls and one of them is well versed in this new wrestling style and lets Tia know all about it. Before they enter, Tia and this new friend approach the announcers and broadcasters of the competition and confirm their suspicion about the underhandedness of El Terriblé.

Not only do they confirm it, but they air their own grievances with him. They’re accustomed to spectating and commenting on luchador matches, not this dishonorable mess that Terriblé has brought with him. However, working on “The World’s Greatest Wrestler’s” event has too large an impact on their own reputation and pay. Not only that, but apparently this is accepted where Terriblé comes from, so there’s nothing that they alone can do. However, they say that they’ll make sure Tia’s matches are shown without editing or false calls and if she's able to get far enough to face and defeat terrible, they’ll help her unmask him. 

The fights continue and Tia is shown defeating Terriblé’s goons and rising to the top until she finally faces Terrible himself. His ring is in an elevated place without direct spectators, and he assumes the announcers and broadcasters are still in his pocket so he speaks rely about how she won’t defeat him and it’s impossible for anyone to do so. She does just this however, and terrible is exposed to everyone watching. The title is hers. 

Tia’s now the world’s greatest wrestler and she reclaims her fathers mask and families honor. This story concludes and an epilogue is shown of the next years competition and honorable fighters. 



Wednesday, October 28, 2015







Various sketches of the fans, father and a couple of the team mates as well. As well as practicing a little more with imitating Diego's style. u v u''










Various concepts for fans and early takes on a rival team member



Trying to hammer out an idea for one of the members of the Rival's group and figure out Diego's style. It's a hard one! ;^;


The basic idea of what Clyde wanted el Terible to look like.
         ~Mustard

mother ideas/ practice diegos style


Tuesday, October 27, 2015

Story?

I was sick Tuesday so im not sure how much further the story has developed but i do have a few suggestions. So we know that its the Evil Luchador Kings birthday and that everything in the town must stop in order to praise him, but this doesnt fully explain why our protagonist wants to fight him.

*what if it also happens to be the protagonist birthday, and now her birthday is ruined because the whole world is celebrating the Evil Luchadors Birthday instead! This gives her incentive to ruin the Evil Luchadors Birthday by fighting him.

*We also don't have an explanation why a little girl can kick ass all of a sudden but i think i have a good explanation. It was her Birthday wish!! As she sat alone with her cake she blows out the candles and wishes that she could have a birthday as good as the Luchador Kings, which then grants her the powers to do so.

Thoughts?






characters