story revised

We start our story with an epic battle between El Terrible’ and Tia’s father, a young Tina, maybe 4-5, watches her grandfather in the sky box at the arena. Tia’s father appears to be winning the match, until El Terrible’ reviles that he is going to kidnap Tia. Tia’s father gives a warning and then looks up at the skybox to see it being swarmed by El Terrible’s goons, while his back is turned El Terrible lands a devastating blow and defeats him. What Tia’s father doesn’t know is that the grandfather was able to fight his way free and escape with Tia. During the escape Tia tries to help her grandfather but bumps her head and gets knocked out. The grandfather takes Tia out of the city to be raised on a farm house.

Tia grows up on the farm outside the city with her grandparents, with no memory of the night of her father’s defeat. To keep her safe form the city, now controlled by El Terrible’ and her father’s fate, Tia’s Grandparents never tell her about that night. Everyday Tia works on the farm growing strong. Her Grandfather recognizes her natural ability to fight, and trains her how to fight like he did with her father. Tia grows up to be fast, strong and able to fight.

 One day Tia goes to the market to buy feed, at the market she sees a flyer for El Terrible Big Birthday Beat-Down, and has flash backs of her father battling El Terrible when she reads El Terrible’s name. She runs home to ask her grandfather. He tells her about her father and how he asked for her to be raised away from the city so she would be safe, because if El Terrible’ had him he would not need to go after her. The grandfather shows Tia pictures and her father’s old mask and even his own old mask, and explains how her father fought for honor and was noble warrior of the people, he inspired people to want to be good to one another. How El Terrible’ was a greedy power hungry tyrant, who used his fame to corrupt the city. He tells her how he was once a great masked wrestler but gave it up for her grandmother. He tells her that she’s old enough to choose her own life now.

That night Tia backs her bag, with her father’s and grandfather’s mask and heads for the city. She takes a bus and falls asleep on the bus ride were she has dream of what it would be like to have her father and in her life. When she wakes the bus is stopped and people are getting off. She looks around and sees her bag is missing. She franticly looks around to see a small boy off the bus with it heading towards the exit of the bus station. She pushes her way off the through the crowd and runs after the boy. Once outside the station she is almost overwhelmed by the city, people, lights, buildings noise, it is all almost too much. She remembers the boy and begins to look around, she lost him to the crowd.

She begins to wonder the city not knowing where she is or where she is going and comes across a skinny man being mugged by 3 masked wrestler thugs. She tells them to leave him alone, which switched their attention to her. She fights them off with ease and they runway. She then asks the man if he’s alright. The man introduces himself as Flaco and thanks her for saving him, and asks her why she helped him. She says simply because he looked like he needed help. Puzzled but pleased he asks her what she’s doing in the city because he can tell she’s not from the city based off of her dress and willingness to help a complete stranger. He offers to buy her a meal for saving him. She declines at first saying she really must be going but then her stomach growls and she remembers all her food and money was in her bag which was stolen.

                Tia accompanies Flaco to a nearby restaurant/ bar (only type of restaurants in city), there Tia learns that Flaco is not a fighter but a builder and fixer and that doesn’t mean much to anybody else in the city. Tia thinks that that is an admirable quality. During the meal Tia recognizes the boy who stole her bag in the bar. The boy gives the bag to a big masked wrestler at the other end of the bar, she get up to go reclaim it. Flaco tries to stop her but Tia ignores him. She approaches the man and tells him that that’s her bag and she wants it back. The man just laughs and continues to drink. Tia reaches for the bag and the man grabs her arm, Tia just smiles and grabs his arm and flips him across the bar into the wall. Tia picks up her bag and walks back to the table. Flaco explains that that is a member of a local wrestle gang and he won’t be happy about that. Tia says she can handle herself. The Masked wrestlers return while Flaco is talking and try to fight Tia, she beats them but a bar fight ensues. Flaco and Tia go out the back of the bar, were they meet Tiny, the boy who stole Tia’s bag, he explains who he is and why he stole it. They all then procced to Flaco’s house.

There Flaco has posters of Tia’s Father before his defeat. She asks him about them, and he explains that the he was the greatest, but after El Terrible took the tittle, he used his new power and fame to promote crime and despair, and that’s why those so many masked wrestling gangs. Now he holds the Birthday Beat down to see if anyone can take him on. Tia explains who she is and how she has to see her father. Flaco says that the tournament is tomorrow and they should go then. He tells Tia that she’ll need a mask if she wants to enter, so she shows him the masks in her bag. Flaco tells Tia how the tournament works, how first it’s a royal rumble and the last two standing go on the next match were they compete as a tag team, they then move on to the next level where they will face last year’s finalists (nobody has ever made it to El Terrible Himself), after that they will have to face El Terrible’s elite goons, then if they make it past them they fight El Terrible. Each district of the city sends 2 wrestlers to represent their district, and that Tia just took out this districts representatives in the bar fight so she can take their place, but she’ll need a partner. Tia says that her father will join her wants he knows she’s there.

The next day they go to the arena, there Tia sees her father being knocked around in the first ring, as a preshow warm up, he doesn’t even fight back. Enraged Tia rushes the ring and starts fighting off the other wrestlers. Tia’s father has no idea what’s happening but he starts to recognize the fighting style and the mask she is wearing as his old mask. He begins to fight back with her. Once everyone in the ring is defeated he grabs Tia and hugs her, asks what and how she got here. He tells her that it’s too dangerous that she shouldn’t be here. She says she’s here to save/avenge him and that together they can defeat El Terrible. She then gives him the grandfather’s mask. He puts it on and the two enter the next level of the arena. The two battle their way to El Terrible’ and defeat him. The crowd goes wild and Tia is now the champ.