story

sorry I've been sick this weekend and haven't posted anything. The work for the story that everyone posted has been really helpful, I'm going to take that and work that  into the original story fixing the problems and plot holes that came up in class. I feel that we had better direction with that one and it with the new changes that we came up with it will work. I'll try to have something posted by tonight or tomorrow, but i do have work form 1-8 today.